Poetry

When I feel verry sad, I try to write that sadness away.I want to share it here because i want to know the opinion of others. I also would liek to read the work of others


here is the first one, please be easy on me.


“Beneath”


Pain
Agony
Loss
I know it all
Keepping everything inside
Nicely hidden
Where it can’ t be found
It burns through the core

Still I can’t cry
Only hurting others
Telling them to stay away
So they won’t hear or see
The grieve and tears of the real me



Please tell me what you think
Feedback is always apreciated.

Very brave for someone who usually hides "the real me" did you write it in English to make it less difficult?

I like it and I like this topic, I hope more people will share their poetry

Thank you

Actually when I write something, I usuallly write in english.I guess I like the language better^^ and well maybe it's easier to express feellings in a language that isn't your mothertongue.

I like it Alex, but it must be hard to feel that way. can i use this topic to post my dutch poetry? i dont like it to express myself in english, i feel like i've just a few ways to say what i want.

I prefer dutch poetry in the dutch forum

that's ok. if i want to post something.